{"id":100,"date":"2010-10-01T10:05:38","date_gmt":"2010-10-01T16:05:38","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/sgttodd.wordpress.com\/?p=100"},"modified":"2019-02-12T19:15:45","modified_gmt":"2019-02-12T19:15:45","slug":"writing-the-blind-elephant","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/2010\/10\/writing-the-blind-elephant\/","title":{"rendered":"Blindly Writing the Elephant"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>So, I&#8217;m almost completely done with my second novel. This is the <img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright\" src=\"http:\/\/i.dailymail.co.uk\/i\/pix\/2010\/07\/14\/article-1294600-0A6F867D000005DC-35_634x691.jpg\" width=\"292\" height=\"318\" \/>one I&#8217;m collaborating with Brandon Sanderson on. Working title:\u00a0The Lurker.<\/p>\n<p>I think I&#8217;ve smashed my face against, then managed to wrap my arms around, a writing principle worth sharing.<\/p>\n<p>I started with a 10,000 word outline that Brandon wrote. We discussed the world and basic plot we would be working with for about four hours over two meetings before he wrote the outline.<\/p>\n<p>I wrote my first novel with an outline too, a numbered list. \u00a0I can&#8217;t speak for Brandon on The Lurker but for me, coming up with an outline was a very mechanical process.<\/p>\n<p>Arbitrarily I aimed for 120,000 words which translated neatly into 30 4,000 word chapters. My outline had 30 chapters in it. Three viewpoint characters translated to 10 chapters each. Three try\/fail cycles worked out to three chapters per cycle per character, which I dutifully labeled as such on my outline.<\/p>\n<p>Then I filled in the basic events for each cycle. What, exactly, were my characters failing and then succeeding at? What did their mini-arcs consist of and how did they fit into the big book-arc? \u00a0I already had a basic idea of what I wanted the book to be about and lots of cool scenes that had written themselves in my head and so forth. That made this process a mix of putting the pieces in their proper places and filling in the blanks.<\/p>\n<p>The elephant tromped into the room when it came time to actually write the chapters so summarized on my outline. I stepped forward, hands outstretched, and started feeling that guy.<\/p>\n<p>It was my book. I knew the basic shape. \u00a0So there was no, &#8216;Oh, this is a snake&#8230;&#8217; garbage. But it was definitely a process of discovery as I wrote each chapter. Some details (a lot of them really) made themselves known, either springing from my subconscious or becoming obvious due to context. Others, also a lot, I had to forge and hammer out in the creative fires. And it was all fun to do.<\/p>\n<p>Later I realized that things were much easier for me if I also outlined each chapter before I actually started in on the actual prose. In most cases, what I ended up with was less an outline for each chapter than notes on my brainstorming session for the chapter, roughly chrono-organized. Once I knew where I was going to that level of detail, getting there was almost all fun. The niftiest things pop up out of nowhere.<\/p>\n<p>The principle? \u00a0Same as always. Just climb on and write.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/10\/Tiger-Eye.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-1149 alignleft\" src=\"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/10\/Tiger-Eye.jpg\" alt=\"Tiger-Eye\" width=\"240\" height=\"320\" srcset=\"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/10\/Tiger-Eye.jpg 240w, http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/10\/Tiger-Eye-225x300.jpg 225w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 240px) 100vw, 240px\" \/><\/a><br \/>\nMy process is definitely more mechanical than a pure discovery writer, but less mechanical than some outliners. It&#8217;s mine, it works for me. It will probably change. And someday I fully expect to discover that it&#8217;s not an elephant at all but a bloody Tiger, and have to change everything.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Thus ends my very first POST ON WRITING.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>So, I&#8217;m almost completely done with my second novel. This is the one I&#8217;m collaborating with Brandon Sanderson on. Working title:\u00a0The Lurker. I think I&#8217;ve smashed my face against, then managed to wrap my arms around, a writing principle worth sharing. I started with a 10,000 word outline that Brandon wrote. We discussed the world &hellip; <a href=\"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/2010\/10\/writing-the-blind-elephant\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Blindly Writing the Elephant<\/span> <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[4,7,15,1,25],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-100","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-fantasy","category-hubris","category-scientifiction","category-uncategorized","category-writing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/100","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=100"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/100\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1151,"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/100\/revisions\/1151"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=100"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=100"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=100"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}