{"id":822,"date":"2012-01-28T13:37:09","date_gmt":"2012-01-28T13:37:09","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/?page_id=822"},"modified":"2019-01-18T19:04:31","modified_gmt":"2019-01-18T19:04:31","slug":"the-light-goes-out","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/short-stories\/the-light-goes-out\/","title":{"rendered":"2011: The Light Goes Out"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>A short story featuring lost love, murder most foul, and robots. The story sprang almost full-blown into my mind while I was talking with my father about Artificial Intelligence and the singularity.<\/p>\n<p>I haven\u2019t sent it anywhere yet but I will soon\u2026and I\u2019ll track my submissions and rejections here.<\/p>\n<p>Edit: Ok, since last I updated I\u2019ve sent this story to <a href=\"http:\/\/www.analogsf.com\/information\/submissions.shtml\">Analog <\/a>and <a href=\"http:\/\/www.asimovs.com\/info\/guidelines.shtml\">Asimovs<\/a>. Both rejections. I cry a little and move on.<\/p>\n<p>Current submission is to\u00a0<a title=\"Lightspeed Magazine\" href=\"http:\/\/www.lightspeedmagazine.com\/\">Lightspeed<\/a>. Also rejected.<\/p>\n<p>I\u2019ve since been through <a href=\"http:\/\/clarkesworldmagazine.com\/submissions\/\">Clarkesworld <\/a>and <a href=\"http:\/\/dailysciencefiction.com\/submit\/story\/guidelines\">Daily Science Fiction<\/a>. Two more rejections.<\/p>\n<p>Today it went to <a href=\"http:\/\/www.intergalacticmedicineshow.com\/cgi-bin\/mag.cgi?do=content&amp;article=submissions\">IGMS<\/a>. Today it came back from IGMS, rejected, but with a note as to why. Thanks, <a href=\"http:\/\/www.ericjamesstone.com\/blog\/home\/\">Eric<\/a>, for taking the time to critique it. I just called Eric and he said that if I manage to fix the \u201cwhy\u201d he\u2019d like to see it again. I think I know how to do that, so I will be.<\/p>\n<p>I made the corrections, which involved punching up the importance of one of the two arcs and solidifying the ending into something stronger. \u00a0Thus improved, I sent it back to Eric and anxiously await a reply.<\/p>\n<p>Got a reply. He wasn&#8217;t looking for the kind of fix I implemented, which was a character ending. He was looking for a science ending. I deliberately left that question open though, so I&#8217;ll leave it open and send it off again.<\/p>\n<p>Sent it to<a title=\"Redstone SF\" href=\"http:\/\/redstonesciencefiction.com\/guidelines\/\" target=\"_blank\"> Redstone SF<\/a>. Waiting&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>No reply from Redstone SF yet. According to their <a href=\"http:\/\/www.facebook.com\/RedstoneSF?ref=stream\">Facebook page<\/a> they&#8217;re finished with the first reading of their latest open submission period. \u00a0And since I haven&#8217;t heard from them I can only assume they&#8217;re still considering it. (Yes, I checked my spam folder.)<\/p>\n<p>Apparently my story made it to the final round of reading and was then rejected. Sigh. This comes after a brutal session of critique at my writing group on another story I&#8217;m working on. Difficult to take.<\/p>\n<p>However, I shall submit again and write on.<\/p>\n<p>Bam! The Light Goes Out is off to<a href=\"http:\/\/www.shimmerzine.com\/\"> Shimmer Magazine<\/a>\u00a0whose guidelines say they lean toward fantasy with a bit of sadness but will consider Science Fiction as well. \u00a0I think TLGO fits the bill. We&#8217;ll see if they agree.<\/p>\n<p>Nope. Another rejection, though a very nice one.<\/p>\n<p>And it&#8217;s off to <a href=\"http:\/\/www.strangehorizons.com\/index.shtml\">Strange Horizons<\/a>. I&#8217;m kind of surprised I hadn&#8217;t already sent it there. I hope I really haven&#8217;t. I&#8217;d hate to be hitting them twice. That&#8217;s just embarrassing.<\/p>\n<p>Nope, another rejection.<\/p>\n<p>Haven&#8217;t sent it anywhere since. No plans to at this time.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>A short story featuring lost love, murder most foul, and robots. The story sprang almost full-blown into my mind while I was talking with my father about Artificial Intelligence and the singularity. I haven\u2019t sent it anywhere yet but I will soon\u2026and I\u2019ll track my submissions and rejections here. Edit: Ok, since last I updated &hellip; <a href=\"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/short-stories\/the-light-goes-out\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">2011: The Light Goes Out<\/span> <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"parent":575,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"class_list":["post-822","page","type-page","status-publish","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/822","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=822"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/822\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1336,"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/822\/revisions\/1336"}],"up":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/575"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/ethanskar.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=822"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}